"Alright, Clyde and I found some weird stuff while we were in detention. A weird looking spider with scales for skin and white pupils for eyes. Whatever these things are, one of them caught me off guard and almost sucked the life out of me. Good thing Clyde resolved the situation." I explained.
For a "modern" story, the world this takes place in is still future dystopian. The world building is somewhat there, but it seems that organized crime is the true government in all the cities. The focus on the MC has distracted from better character development of any of the peripheral characters leaving the story to feel unbalanced. This could get better over time. I've really enjoyed MVS and think it had better direction and focus from the start. This story needs more of both.
What a great book sat down and read every chapter that was free. Amazing writing excellent world building this will be a gem just watch! The way the power up is goes against everything I read so far and it is only the beginning! Every character introduced has a story and builds with the main character!
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