Read up to 506. To be honest, I was hesitant to read this after reading Nanomancer. I didn’t think that Reili would write something else at the same level as his prior work but was pleasantly surprised. Love the characters and Alice’s development so far. I do think there’s a lot going on with all the gods, the hidden WILL and now Alice and the Queen having part divinity and the new cult but it doesn’t feel complicated which is nice). Overall I can’t wait for more chapters.
The MC is a likable fellow. He is not overly oppressive, neither is he servile. He acts well. He can also control himself, and doesn't throw himself at any pretty girl. He doesn't let ppl to bully him into service.The setting seems somewhat different from Warlock of the Magus World, but still similar.
I prefer stories that aren't written in first person. I could handle it if it is, but this writer is the kind that has to ruin the story by constantly switching.
The story is readable so far. The only issue is that the chapters are very, very short. It is better to combine several chapters and make it one.This looks like a teenage author who is also new on this platform.
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