It was a good read. As what the author had said on his review, his sentence structure needs improvement. But welp, I also need it for mine so overall, this story good. It has interesting and unique plots, and even tho the pace was a little slow at start, it did not disrupt my immersion while reading it.
The concept of colorblindness was interesting and definitely piqued my curiosity towards the development of drug and evolution. The paragraphs can be a little too wordy and clunky, but this is just due to my personal preference and can be easily fix with a bit of editing, and has no impact on the story itself. It is worth a read.
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