Writing style needs more practise, but good for a first story. Intiriguing story. Just reading for the plot but if in the future author decides to rewrite it and fix some stuff, will be first to read again.
Cliche and this name "mystical dominator of the nine heavens" what kind of chunibyou author would name their novel this what next " Nine Stars Saint God"
"Go with Dave's strategy, I don't want to say it but Lady Maria can only do so much with what she has" Scott said with determination. It hurt him to say those things to his former teacher, but he steeled his resolve. He was no longer a student anymore; Now he is a Guild Master and his Guild depends on him, he can't let his emotions and his past ties get in the way of their victory. He has to man up for his Guild.
Kitty sat there in shock till she realized the human walking toward the corpse. Kitty quickly stood up and limped after the human. The human glanced back at her but didn't say anything. Kitty watched as the human finally reach the Rex and pulled a blood red sword from the back of the corpses head. Disgusted the human flung brain matter and blood onto the ground and held the sword straight out and let the rain rinse it off. It seemed the human didn't notice she was covered in blood and mud and was looking pretty rough. When the sword was clean the human closed her eyes and the sword slowly dissolved into red particles that turned into a red dot between the humans eyebrows.
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