Crumbling Cakes

It's disappointing that the author is stretching the story with useless lines inbetween. A novel should be interesting when story is told in a flow, but in every chapter I can see that author is adding lines just to lengthen the chapters. It's not fun reading like this. Might quit reading if this continues likes this.

I have only read about 20 chapters, but nothing much different from other mmo genres. Nothing outstanding nor anything bad. Iam only posting this review due to the low ratings i have seen. It deserves a 4 or even 3.5.

A very intriguing story. This was such a fun read And I can't wait for more. I can rest assured about the quality of translations since this is being edited by Lunaelle. Also this is the first book I have ever spent my Coins on!

What happened to the updates

first of all im a big fan of the mythology genre ( greek, norse, indian, egyptian mythology etc...) first of all the mc ezra zephyr was naive innocent and ignorant in the beginning, but after his years of training with the wolf of norse fenrir he became cunning, ruthless etc.. and it was beautifully done. the characters developed is clearly to see. not only ezra but also those around him. when you start reading it it's hard to stop there no dumb mc no stupid young manster and all those cliché stuff. little of the world is beaing revealed right cause it's still the beginning of the novel. i did escpect ezra to be a bit more overpowering than how is now. there's a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing major.im not really good at writing reviews but guys this is a hidden gem give it a try and you won't be disappointed.

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