Crossing over with a system——I began cultivating from the womb

" As you know i only awakened know . I'm going to open the seal " As he said he went near the door and punched it with his spiritual energy . The door is broken and before him a golden light appeared   

"I can choose any ability?" Marcus raised an eyebrow.

-Red Banana x999

"Here. If we are going to fight, we are going to do it on fair terms. It is a Jade Light pill. It will help recover your energy."

My world's on fire, how about yours?

It's a very good story  I like the plot development keep it up

That's my personal opinion so don't take offense.The writing quality is good. Some mistakes here and there but acceptable. The writing style seems a little bit weird as the author tries to make things sound very powerful: Divine that, Divine this. Some logic mistakes too, like those assassins. No one would send some weak chickens like this to assassinate an high ranking noble. Descriptions are too long. It leaves less room for imagination which I think is an essential part of reading. The fights also seem too slow because author writes too much detail.As I don't have that much information about the story it is unpredictable. But at first sight it seems like a standart continental war story with fantasy as foundation and some schemes in the background.Mc seems like a regular Isekai-Mc: Strong-willed with cheats.The world is a big fantasy world with many races. Powerlevels explained clearly.All in all its nothing really new, while every story is unique on its own. It has quite many logic errors.It may sound harsh but it's mostly because I have high standarts as I've already read so much and find many stories predictable.

A novel with a really good start, it's fast pacd and filled with funny monologues. hope the author doesn't drop it.