Author review here --What can you expect from the first volume? Well, it is a sort of slow start, as the protagonist's system isn't unlocked until about 20~ ish chapters. Keeping that in mind, this is an action-heavy story, so if you're a fan of that, give it a shot !
Shameless Author here! ☺☺I'm giving myself Five stars for creating this masterpiece... LOL!!Let me make some things clear.No Harem!No Yuri!No Extensive Explanations or narratives!I'll try my best in Characters' development, and World building!No one is perfect, so please if you see any error! please call to my Notice!!Before thinking of dropping the Novel or anything!! please read up to Chapter 10!!I don't need your powers stones and Vote if you don't read up to Chapter Ten! 😂😂😂😂😂LOL!!I'M just Kidding!!! Bath me with your powers stones!!!!!!!!Thanks for checking it out!And please leave a Review!!!
Man I like the story but the grammar is atrocious. You could easily make this story way better by just using grammar or having AI refine each chapter and revise it. It make take some time but that would make the story so much better. I understand English may not be your first language but there are tools out there that can help you. If this is just a story you are doing for fun I get it . There’s no need to waste time but if you’re trying to get contracted and make money i guarantee you no one is going to pay for this kind of work .
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