Remember that the “battle is the Lord's” (1 Samuel 17:47). David reminds us that our God is God, who is worthy to be worshipped. He is worthy of being our delight, worthy of our dependence, and worthy of our devotion. He is worthy to be loved; to be praised; to be exalted and to be followed.
For a reference I read what was free. The grammar is ok with minor errors here and there. The story hasn’t really taken off for me yet but it is progressing slowly. In the free chapters the class system isn’t really explored by the MC. He has no skills or abilities yet either. He also hasn’t used the dagger he found even though he is aware it is special, where is the gamers curiosity? He also took a while to use his SP after lvling up. The readers also get a hint about vampires and the other country having them in the real world but nothing else about the stories main story line. The MC also doesn’t seem to have anything special about him or unique to make him stand out yet. I do like how he killled NPCs to lvl up like a true assassin. Also I would stop repeating your last chapter in the next one even if it doesn’t effect the cost readers will interpret it as doing so. Hope your story does good in the future.
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