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Mannnnn!!! Thalia is really getting into my last nerve!!!! Dammmnnn it!!!!

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I am hooked with this novel. The imagination is wild. I love paranormal novels.............................................................................................................adding it to my fav.

I'm going to be honest, this novel has very little adventure, a lackluster MC personality, and the whole berserker thing seems extremely odd. The skill text that the MC reads are also pretty funky.Not sure if MC is suppose to be a Gauls or a asian mountain person like the Miao or something similar.

Wowza someone finally playing the dad of the young master, this would be incredibly funny and interesting as long as the son character isn't an unlikeable @z$hole but more just stumbles into trouble on accident and becomes more doted on.

This is by far One of the best if not the best Harry Potter fan fiction I've read, all I ask of you is to not drop it... But if you do have a solid reason to do so I won't/can't blame you... Pls keep this personality of his it is very different in all the others that I have read and the one where Harry is in Slytherin is fairly rare so I give my support to you!!! (even though it may not mean much)

I think the discrimination of the story should also add “crazy fanatic with following his delusions of be good and serving for god “ the way the mc justify his doings”killings” is just halfassed ,and the flow of the story is not grate we dont have a clear presence of the mc thinking process in the start his family background ,world state and world around him which is not constituent.over all i it 3.8/5 points but the story has so much potential maybe the story could be re edited by professional  the  it could be one of the top stories with great fame and could be one of those where i would want to wait for its update everyday eagerly.

This book would have potential but in my point of view...🚶For one MC can fight with beings that are waaaaaay stronger than him yet his strength is at level 6! like WHAT????!!!!!!!Secondly the imbalance between his stats is just a joy like...let me explain am a chap 47 and throughout the whole time he only adds points to he's intelligence 😡 yet he's so fast and defits beings stronger than him.  Yes I know 😃 it helps his mana but isn't strength  agility and whatnot required and I think that's one of the reasons this book is lagging so muchAlso what is this no gender balance. MC doesn't fight women like I get be respectful but he's in a world of dog bite dog a woman can kill , fight and does many more to men and vice versa can happen yet MC does fight women 🤨🙄Honestly I come & go cause I need FP & also am bored but this novel would have done better but it lacks alot . I personally wouldn't have continued this book but the more read the more you think about it .I hope MC improves not only psychically but mentally tooTho he reincarnated he's stupid 😐anyways I hope I get I reply cause I need some motivation to continue.but it isn't a bad book just would never make it to top 50