I really like your story.The world background and the lore is really interesting and the mystery is alright too. But just one problem i have. As of now im at chapter 178. And recently the MC is becoming less and less likeable. He is someone who stole a class that isnt supposed to be his. His actions brought in a lot of consequences resulting in billions of lives being at stake, and he knows it. But our MC who is supposed to be a humble dude keep running away from his responsabilities. And he justifies it with "i have free will". Yep you have free will. But when you nake a choice, you gotta deal with the consequences that come with it.Also what is his deal with him and killing people? Just because they know your identity he is gonna kill everybody, even though not all of them are hostile to you? Dude is supposed to be humble even though he is 24/7 being an as* and being rude to people. Really want to read your book, but if i dont like the MC, it really put off my reading enjoyement, wich is a pity because like i said your book is really good.
This story don't make any senseIt's too edgy But it's still funny and entertainAnd that's makes this novel worth to read. I recommend y'all to give a shot to this story.This story deserve more attention
Captain Dorian immediately pressed the evacuation button. However, his ship, which was in the middle of the formation, together with a few other ships was cleanly cut into two halves simultaneously. The resulting vacuum pulled him and the rest of the crew out to space as they struggled to switch on the emergency life support function on their gray bodysuits. Multiple explosions spread through their formation like a virulent virus, engulfing the remaining ones, destroying them together.
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