This one honestly deserves a lot more attention , the interactions between the mc and the main girl are entertaining , it's a breath of fresh air from system novels , the plot is well thought out , some might complain about the girl but she's not a tsun tsun and overall quite useful to the mc. The writing quality is good , nothing bothers me till now and the story is interesting and entertaining , overall worth the read
Gosh, It’s so difficult to find quality stories on this site and finding quality villain stories where the mc is actually psychotic is even more arduous. The mc in this story has been placed in a perfect place to allow him to continue being a villain and he’s even introduced to other ‘predators’. The plot is great and I’m actually really happy he kills just because he likes seeing people below him instead of a childhood trauma or something. Anyways, so far, the story is spectacular and I bet it will continue to be after the author recovers from their hiatus. Also, just wanna say that the gore is amazing and the author actually goes into what he’s doing instead of just being like “he cut off his head and felt amazing” or something of the like.
Rather cliche system story, but that doesn't mean it's bad. What I dont like is how bad the grammar is and there is no improvement in fact i feel like it got worse, and since there is nothing new and interesting about this novel I'd rather not have to struggle to decipher what the author meant.
Really had my hopes up but its a waste of time.As a previous review said its immature and the dialogue is horrendous. The grammar as well. As soon as i started reading it i regretted it.
First off, this isn't the typical face-slapping teacher system novel. In fact, there hasn't been a single "face-slapping" event yet.From what we have seen so far of the system, it does not focus too much on teaching students. Rather, the system has been mainly used to far to strengthen himself. The way that the system allows the MC to get stronger is also quite nice imo, it sends him to dungeons where he has to work for stuff rather than just being handed everything.
Your story is great! I love how you cliffhang. It made me want to wait for another chapter. Nice characters specially Yuuki and i love how unique your writing style.
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