It rarely happens to me that I don't understand a book at all.Is this supposed to be comedy? A tragedy? A lesson?Maybe the jokes and recognizable quotes got lost in translation.I really would like to know what this book is supposed to be, what message it is trying to send.Can't even review this properly, Characters are stereotypes so far and MC is a non-entity.World Building is not there, normal World, all consequences of an Immortal just casually walking around are ignored.
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So far Story is good. I like the concept. Keep it up..................................................................................................pls, add tags for the novel.
The ending of the first chapter turned out to be luxurious.Curious learning, books that have always been associated with silence, peace, wisdom, and then suddenly methods of extreme degree of savagery in teaching books from under the stick.It is curious that from chapter to chapter, history begins to take on its own contours, it is becoming more and more fascinating and exciting. This is a brilliant work! You canβt stop reading one chapter after another.From the comments, in my subjective opinion, the first two chapters are somewhat drawn out, there is no activity to go on to read the third chapter, but if you get to it ... then easily, without even noticing the chapter numbers, the reader may look back and already be surprised find yourself reading chapter 10.The author of patience, new ideas.With interest
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Parcels of jewellery were lying about openly on the benches. It was obvious that the fence had opened out his entire stock, taken the most negotiable of the best and bolted in panic with as much as he could carry.
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