Clean Bowled

quality of translation dropped/ different translator after ch 40

I honestly really like this book, not to many good forging books. wish It could be updated more. though it is a niche subject most other ones are way to fast pace.

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

story is interesting and want to see more one thing that could be worked on is character descriptions because i dont really have a clear image of mc or the girls

This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.

his novel is here bıraktım.mc in the next section, he is hunted by guards, or the object of research of sorcerers olur.mc if he ate her and then started hunting in the woods, I would continue reading, but when Mc became someone who didn't work with his brain, tried to be heroic, didn't have intelligence, I quit the novel

Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.

It wont be wrong if i say this book is greatttt. The world and character development is perfect. The plot is amazing so far. Keep up with the good work author.