City Lights and Coffee Nights

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This novel is good for a quick fun read. It is definitely a comedy genre novel, so don’t click on it expecting dog-blood drama or hot-blooded protagonists.Personally, I think that the best part of this novel is learning about the alternate earth that it is set in. Humans can live to be over 200 years old, with the publically known oldest being 280. Of course, the MC is several hundred millenia old, and has the historical artifacts to prove it.Summary: popular alternate-universe celebrities are participating in a reality tv series, and happen to encounter the MC who is living in a small village. The MC’s house is full of super-expensive items, which shocke the world when experts analyze it. For the public, even the food the MC eats can make A-level celebrities bankrupt, but to the MC it’s just low-level items that he’s been gifted ‘recently’. TLDR: a good comest story for a quick read, but almost no potential as a popular novel

Read up till the latest chapter, have to say, I'm glad I didn't vote for this trash novel. The summary was pretty telling on what kind of novel this will be, and I was not wrong. There is no consistency in the author's writing. He writes himself into a corner, then break the wall behind him so that he isn't cornered. Plot is typical subpar revenge types, and from many of the chapter comments, seemed to be a patchwork of other novels too. Says there's no job restriction in equipment, items all appeared with job restrictions. Game only up for first day and MC already grabbed 3 or 4 "hidden" quest? Milk a skill for easy monies. Meet beauties. Meet cardboard "arrogant young master". Meet a good number of "elites". Get noticed by "elites". Assuming MC has been playing continuously because super nutrients, what about the "elites"? 1 day old game, already people claiming themselves "elites" lol. Already there's "established elite/legendary guild". Also, exp needed to level up is ridiculous, must take casual players months to even get to level 10. Losing a level every time you die is pretty stupid mechanic too, a level 99 dying would probably smash his helmet in rage. I also don't know how the author is gonna write out the revenge plot. If he's not going to be bothered with the traitor and just shoot to the top, then revenge plot without revenge? If he is, then what next? Befriend him again to f*ck his a*s hard? Or just be a giant d*ck to an "innocent" guy who haven't done what he was suppose to do? Anyways, typical revenge plot with sides of plagiarism. Inconsistent and flat story, bland characters with sides of ***ism. This author managed to speed up the decay of the story, mediocre novel overall.

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I literally have no idea whats happening. Does anything get explained soon ? Random sht keeps happening and we dont even know anything. Like is there going to be an explanation soon  ?Also with how he is acting, like not knowing anything how tf are his companions not suspicions?

It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.

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