Chronoshift: The Paradox System

Ray: I promise that I will kill you someday.

Aisyah benar - benar mengikuti Jeffry hingga tiba di sebuah halte bus. Dia menepikan mobilnya tak jauh dari mobil laki - laki itu.

"Then I'm not allowed in here , I should cook now for our dinner" She said while walking towards the door  

Vaun memandang Ice Phoenix dengan seringai. Dia memikirkan sesuatu lagi.

The story starts of as wild but the details are clear and understood and as always the world building is great and the Mc is good and the refrences are perfectly timed, the story itself has a great potential som I’m looking forward for more.

I had to comment on this. I read all the chapters in free access and... it was terrible! I mean, it really inspired some kind of horror in me looking at the concept of the groundhog from this point of view. It didn't help that the author described in detail the reactions of both the MC and the viewers to what was happening. Overall, an impressive novel. Special thanks for the Eastern flavor.