Chronoshift: The Paradox System

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This novel is different n refreshing, the female lead is different from the usual stereotypes of fl, and until now (ch 40) we still didn't know who's the ML, I just hope  this is a reverse harem novel 😜 but sadly this kind of novel only have a minority fans 😭 I really hope this one will continue to update 🤩

I think the chars are fun so far,  and the writing is believable and neat!  I'm not nearly caught up but this book has been a breath of fresh air recently!

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Great story!Great mc past!Mc not too op.The pace is not too fast but not too slow i think.Its remind me the top 3 fiction in qidian about korean-france boy that sick then got system and become superstar but author drop it.Is this monogamy or harem??

Good book sir, this book looks like a diamond hidden in a mine. From the writing style, story development, world background, and updating stability is all good. I hope you'll continued writing this book.Good luck sir :3:v- SIENDONIA

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Okay where do I start…. I dont really understand why this novel has such a high rating. I started reading it only because I generally like this kind of story and it had a high rating. Now after about 60 Chapters I’m dropping it out of the following reasons: - Fighting in general is just unrealistic. Take the first few chapters for example: Untrained, weak and stupid MC gets chased by a pack of wolves. He climbs on a tree, breaks off a few twigs, somehow magically sharpens them and then throws them like olympic champion and impales all enemies….Of course ! And stuff like that happens again and again. - The System/Powerscaling is just completely random. He basically just kills wolfs at first, which are like the weakest creatures, and suddenly he is the stongest guy in town. As if every other citizen never fought a single battle. Apparently the wolves are pretty abundant in this reason but only he leveled up significantly. I mean he is the hero but as far as I know, that just means he has no level cap. A System is a good way to set up a frame for your story. How do things work? What are you capable off and what do you need to do to get stronger. Doesn’t really work if your MC is playing by different rules! And dont even talk about the 400 ultimate skills he colllects left an right from every mop character that exists . - The MC is just annoying….he starts as a guy who has basically no self esteem, no real will to live and who doesnt stand up for himsel….that itself is not a bad thing, it’s just how the story is. Then he gives up his humanity and becomes a typical cliche villain who explains his evil plan, mocks his opponent for beeing week and then gets nearly killed in the next second .He just feels inconsistent….For example he just knows lots off stuff that he actually shouldn’t know just because he read a book for a few hours and in the next second he makes completely stupid decisions, like killing three guys and stealing their wagon afterwards. I mean if i kill someone the first thin i do is stealing their car and park it in my driveway 😩 Well if you can look over the things i wrote, than you might enjoy this novel but i stopped reading it and will probably not continue it. I’m no native speaker, if you find some mistakes, you are allowed to keep them 😉