it's pretty smooth and so far there is none idiotic encounter that's happening (chap20) though it's somewhat troublesome to think that he needs to stream to get points but how about the future? maybe some creep stalking him to take what he finds? or owner of the treasure item recognizing him to be someone who collect valuable treasure and selling it at high sky price? (tend to overthink) but it's a good story to pass time
Author here with a shameless review. I'll like to thank everyone who has read the book so far and would love for you to leave a review. Chapter and paragraph comments are appreciated and I always look at them for feedback. I like to write as it satiates my creativity and I hope you all can enjoy the crazy things I think up. This is also the first book I've gotten to premium, so I will be investing plenty of my creativity and effort into it. Thanks once more for reading.
The first 200 chapters are very good because they are focused on the MC. The MC has a very well thought out background. The story pacing and world building is good until you get to chapter 250. After you hit the 300 chapter mark, the writer switches the focus from hero building to setting up for a kingdom building novel and you literally spend tons of chapters on side characters, to-be-killed antagonist, and other horribly boring plots in the novel (filler content).If it wasn't for the novel killing kingdom building content, this novel would be up there in the series rankings but sometimes you just have to expect that the writers actually are aiming to write about a kingdom building novel and the MC is really only there to start out the novel. Maybe I will come back to this novel when all the current arc is done because it is over 33 heavens-tier boring.Maybe it's not kingdom building but it certainly is a lot of off screen time for the MC in terms of time off screen and frequency between each off screen session.
A wonderful way of writing, there's an exciting flow through the words, amusing scenarios rushing through the lines, it's an overall good story, honestly.
The amount of stupidity in this novel is just on another level. I can’t stop facepalming.🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️🤦u200d♂️
writing this just after volume 4 (148), great world building, nice way of incorporating the other worlders and the magic system is well developed. characters are unique, the world is unique and the story is only just getting started (up until this point)
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