it's a pretty poor story overall. it has many very lame anime cliches and there's basically no story development. it's a shame because it has so much potential.
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The writing quality (especially during the x-rated scenes) is superb. What really got me into the story was the way the author was able to describe how the MC did certain things and solve certain issues. Just hope he creates personal countermeatures for the system just in case things don't go as planned. Putting too much trust in an A.i-system always have backlashes in the end if one doesn't tread carefully. Considering he has his knowledge from Earth, he should be more cautious. I also wonder if he'll be able to return to his home Earth, and find out the real reasons or circumstances that ended in his favor. If he's living in an actual VR-game - will players start popping up in the later sequence of the story? And if they do, will he find an actual "player-version" of his trueself? And if a player-version of his trueself appears, will he be able to identify him and also merge with this playerself; thus, being able to control two bodies simultaneuosly in difference dimensions? Will he be able to bring items from the game into the real world using his game abilities? Will his game knowledge allow him to conquer the world and terraform other planets using fictional & unbelievable technology? Is he technically in a different timeline? Is his present circumstance an anomoly? This is what makes the story interesting. Because you can create your own speculations and it can ignite a flame into the story.It's very fast paced. And you can tell the author enjoys writing his story as well. YOU HAVE MY FULL SUPPORT.
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