Chronicles of Eldoria: Age of War

I really love this novel and I hope Webnovel decides to keep the book. It is very interesting with the game elements and system design. The translation quality is amazing!!

....................................................................................................great all around........................

It starts a little slow but is overall a good read. It ends up being quite funny and hard to put down. Although in parts it does get a bit repetitive but I think the author has sorted out their storyline more now. Overall it’s a big thumbs up 👍 from me.

Love the story.  Can't wait for the next update. This story has a good pace it is neither to fast or slow,  It fully develops it's characters, plot, background, etc.

Its a pretty good story, the writing needs a bit of work as I have found a few mistakes here and there. But overall the story great and has potential. Keep on writing

"Everyone excellent job so far" The mirage said emotionlessly "You must be all wondering what is this all about, worry not this will not take long. Now that the first round of The Games has ended, what better way for us to continue that moving on the second round of The Games."

an amazing read....definitely a hidden gem

Reviewing after I've read to chapter 236.The novel has an interesting premise: the MC can cultivate in a different world in his dreams, and can transfer skills and objects between worlds at the cost of depleting his soul energy. In the real world, he starts off as a poor fisherman dealing with an oppressive gang, then as he gains in cultivation, he has to resist more powerful cultivators and sects that want to steal his resources. Due to the time difference in his dreams vs the real world, he amasses more cultivation, power, influence, and knowledge in the other worlds (say thousands of years there vs decades in the real world), and uses his resources there to increase his cultivation in the real world.Pros:- there's a true sense of mystery in the real world: we don't learn anything unless the MC does, and as a rogue cultivator, he only slowly gains in knowledge even after his power level is impressive.- interesting key ability that drives his growth- he doesn't become OP in the real world very fast, instead has stable growth and there's a realistic sense of risk as he tries to grow without being noticed by cultivation sectsCons:- the pacing is slow- the systems he's cultivating don't really make much sense, are overly intricate, and the author spends way too much time going over their details instead of moving the plot forward- it's not unusual to have chapters that are nothing but info-dump on details that don't really matter and are confusing- the MC has no motivations or interests beyond becoming a stronger cultivator- the characters, including the MC, lack depth- the MC has no real meaningful relationships with other peopleIt's a fun enough read-- to experience his growth in strength  and knowledge of the cultivation world in the real world-- that I am continuing to read it. But it's so slow moving that I stack up chapters and read them like 20 in a go, so that I can see some development. I think also the tendency of the author to spend chapter info-dumping rather than moving the plot forward is increasing over time.