It's just a single chapter but I can't say that Iam not interested in it. Vampire and another race people.Really can't wait for more.Nice plot for main character. Weak to strong huh. Please I want more.
Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is same please do something about it Also THE ORIGIN SYSTEM ON OTHER SYSTEM REQUIRED is too good .Keep up the good work also increase the post rate if possible.
My first impressions from the first few chapters is that the writer didn't do very much research or preparation. The world building and storytelling is shaky with poor background and people showing up and doing things almost inexplicably. Characterization is almost non-existent. I don't hold out much hope for this story at this point.
Please Post More (: the novel that you wrote is one of the best that I have ever read online. So keep going, talent shouldn't just vanish. As for the viewers be sure to read this novel.
Writing quality is great, I don't have to reform the sentences in my head.*****Updates are prety good(not the "5 updates per 3 days now wait month" style). ****Story seems to come along nicely, not breaking apart every 3 chapters like other novels. *****Characters feel alive, realistic. *****Book too small to judge background yet, so **** until expansion.Overall, it's a good read. 4.6 rounds up to 5btw is this the correct way to do spoilers?
hahaha, i do like that the mc's power lame and get sent to the unimpressive school,* thumbs up* a squishy face, haha like spongebob overall its a good read, i recommend it, keep up the good work author! KUDOS to you!
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