Chasing Whispers (Ongoing)

I love the novel story development and world building is great and I absolutely love the MC   and how well it is written

Ptui! This author's style is all about selling his integrity for immediate cheap thrills. Everything is retconned as soon as possible, even his body shape. It even happens from paragraph to paragraph; he'll clearly use a technique to boost his damage and then the next sentence he'll say "he didn't even use a technique!" Tangentially related, the name of the novel is Permanent Martial Arts, but the MC avoids martial arts like the plague. It's all just punching as hard as he can with no respect for martial arts. Only with the most dismissive and cynical eye could someone say that martial arts is only about punching hard. There's even some exposition about how martial arts is more than just hitting hard and then he continues to just do that. World background is pretty cool, it'd probably be like a 4 if it wasn't inconsistent. Superman exists as a fictional character. There are westerners and Asians despite it not being Earth. Technology is all over the place; it's just advanced until it's not for impact reasons.Character design is okay. I like the romance because it's so muted and feels kind of real. It's very reasonable for young people to not even know why they like each other. Specifically, it's nice to see other people have relationships. I actually don't mind harem novels, but my problem with them is usually only the MC can get all the best girls. It's great to see an MC with friends and that those friends have their own lives. Translation quality isn't bad. It's very readable with only some minor issues.Despite all of it's problems, I'm still reading >.>

Great novel ...... unfortunately I have to drop it since I can't tolerate him being a simp towards two women (those two just don't deserve it). Simping should have limits!!!

This story is awesome and cool. Also how you started off from a different view. And I like your character. Also how you described the areas in great detail. As if one is there going through the journey. Sorry if my way of wording is a bit off I don't want to give out to much of your story. I want everyone else to give it a read.

Its a Pretty good read, the initial chapters aren't bad and the progress is good. Though  I'd like more updates, the Hiatus has been on for sometime.

Isamu was one turn away from her class when she ran head first into something. Or, someone. The person she ran into was Kazuki Arata. Kazuki Arata has been in Isamu's class since freshman year. She didn't really know him but Isamu knew he was from a wealthy family and was vice president on the student council.

The petal in his grasp flew towards the flower, while the large petal on Nevanna's finger fell to the stone floor and the smaller petal was carried by the wind to the flower as well.

I looked at my mom who was terrified to death. She glared at me fiercely as she held her daughter tightly who was unconscious. She still pointed the knife at me, which clearly stated she would attack once again to protect Lydia. A mother can get really crazy when she protects her children, but now I had seen it with my own eyes.