Once again you took me on an enchanting adventure! Such a great storyteller. I have read all of the books in this family and can’t wait for more. You are my number one author here. Great storyline, written well, awesome characters, good twists and turns and held my interest from start to finish.
My goodness! Great work, thor! The story concept just quite antimainstream and interesting. Really anticipate the next chapter of this story. Keep up on a good work!
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Enlightenment, that does not have any meaningful consequences.Discovering your “true” self every 20 chapters gets old quite quick. Especially if it’s essentially meaningless in terms of actions as the MC does not at all change after them. The situations and conversations are also very repetitive and wordy for no reason. A lot of potential though for improvement as the concept and world are quite interesting even if not wholly innovative. The women, booze and gambling aspect is fun but again lacking in execution.
ProsWorld building Loving familyVr game mechanicsConsMC character is not consistent. He is supposedly a genius but I haven’t seen any such thing from him. Being a genius, he is also oblivious to females around himI don’t mind stories with or without harem. But this one is obviously going for the non harem route with Luna as the fmc but leading lot of girls to the MC. Amanda is not properly resolved
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