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Due to my lack of experience with the Cultivation genre beyond that one Worm fanfic I read months ago, I really have no right to criticize about the mary sue-ish nature of the characters. Σ(´∀｀；). What I can say however is that the grammar could use some work. Some sentences feel incomplete, missing a word here and there. There's also some inconsistencies with the tenses being used in the same paragraph. The world is fairly detailed, and I can see the story going far with a bit more polish. Keep on keeping on 👍

This is one of those novels wich makes a magic apocalypse good like people are not overly dumb since characters kinda resemble ctual humans instead of what most do with pure idiots as side characters

The greatest story that i have read online.The pace of the story, the caracters, the worldbuilding are perfect. It feels so good to have secondary caracters that have a life and are not just here to be a filler.Great job ! Really worth your time !I would love a collector paper edition.

Another review after 2 weeks to help the author. the release rate has been consistent and the story progress at fast pace.

Enjoyable story so far and a MC who uses his mind and not just his fists,( though he's not at all shy or even hesitant about bringing the pain.😁).

The world was set to a fantasy world! I am intrigued by the story and how will the story progress! The authors knows how to narrate vividly. It has potential in the future if I will look at it! Kudos author! Write more and you will improve more!

A bright light shone in Sparrow's eyes, once the light dimmed and receded a bright blue lake could be seen in front of her.