This is just another TJSS work. If you have read one then you have read them all. Expect team ups, awful romance, immature characters and bad decisions everywhere. My issue with TJSS is always the same. He reuses too many of his ideas and all of his stories are incredibly childish. Even when there are mature aspects it never loses that childishness. Some people might appreciate that when 99% of other cn's are gratuitous violence and edge galore.
it's very good, but why would you use Zoom as the book cover? He is a super-speed serial killer, he is the definition of evil; so evil the speed force punished him by making him the Black Flash, the Grim Reaper of speedsters.
I like the character that he is not picking girls up like Pokémon (am at the beginning of the story, like chapter 45) and how he is not like this evil MC a good person and helps his parents🙃🙃🥰
The plot is good you introduced a lot within 7 chapters although it's not much try to update chapters like 3 chapters a week that will be much faster for you to get the plot somewhere that we the readers could understand but the characters are well written you can understand their ego and emotion i really enjoyed your work i hope you don't stop there cause i would like to see what's gonna happen with logan
Stygwyr continued heading to the temple and exchanged greeting whenever he passes by a monk. His status was in no way lower than them for he himself was an envoy.
Whereas at the Rebirth Realm and above, it was Divine Sense, which was also the highest level the energy of the soul was able to attain in the path of cultivation in the heaven and earth. Supposedly, when one ascended to become a Heavenly Immortal, the Divine Sense was able to transform a step further. But this level was too far away. Just think about it, how many cultivators were able to ascend to become Heavenly Immortals from ancient times until now?
There was a nagging sense of urgency in his mind that prevented him from thinking about anything else. He vigorously attempted to move his body but it felt like he was traversing through a thick pool of sludge, neither able to swim nor find a suitable purchase.
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