Concept of story is very good.But, the author don't know how to create scenario in the story. Most of the story was cliche and vey boring. The day after he gets system he becomes extremely arrogant that he puts no one in the eye. What can he do if someone hurts his family and starts to slow down his business. For finding 7th rank pet they lost another 7th rank pet, and they still obediently listened to MC and gone to go deep in the fracture space to search. Are they dumb or what. What if peak 9th Rank pet comes this time.
If there is anything to be fault, it is its release rate. So far, I have seen it out of trial read, yet no new chaps, so sad.If there anything wrong with content, per now, it would be lack of using Imperialism CB on every nation on the map, Nationalism CB on Prussia, or crush the revolution on Frace. Or better yet, PU over somebody in Europe. What a disappointment. Really not the way Austria should be.
Wow! what an intriguing and captivating plot it go. Some parts I had to play the detective. kudos to the author and I would like to recommend this novel.
This is my second novel,focused on superpowers and dark themes.Hope you will like it!The begining may look similar to Venom,but it's just the alien part,so no problem!
The story has great potential, the authors writing style sure is creative and the flow is so natural through each read. And ofcoz there are few spelling errors but that's something that can be fixed. Overall this was a good read.
First of all, good job so far sir author. I hope you can keep up with this momentum, and i wish you all the best.Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job
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