Its alright for your first attempt. Keep it up for I liked it. Just don't drop it.Be stable. I think you lack the ability to explain an event pretty clearly and in a stable way. But I think you can improve it after some period. I think that you don't make grammatical mistakes and your writing is alright.
Mas infelizmente meu grito atraiu atenções inesperadas alguns dinossauros eles são difíceis de matar e muito fortes então eu corro, mas um dinossauro me encurrala eu penso comigo mesmo.
After finish eating, my sister left first. She was the Student council president in our school. I checked my things to prepare to leave, for a moment I was still hesitating if I can really adapt to a school where there are many people around.
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