Briffin - why do you do this to me?

It lacks thrilling moments and schemes which i like most... But the story is promising i just feel it lacks something more.... I just read it from early stage but lets read for more updates to know how the story develops

translation quality pluments after 40 chapters. what waste of possibly good story

ok im reading it i have high hopes for this after i read the sypnosis i hope this novel is good and someday become popular

interesting story, so far the development of story is good hope the next chap will not drop..keep going

Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

I haven't read many novels of this genre but reading this novel is boosting interest in me to read more of its kind. I liked the concept and enjoyed every minute of my reading time. that's all any story needs to be good, if you enjoy it, it's gold.

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