Brawler's Eternal Progression

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El chico Iida es como un pez en el agua mientras que el otro es un maestro de todo segun su caracteristicas, si mal no recuerdo el chico entro en una velocidad asombrosa cuando incio el examen practico, aunque no avanzaba mucho.

I only read up to chapter 11.In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad.But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this.Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic.I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10.In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice.I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story.Its a bad start in my opinion.You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice.I hope my review can help you to get better.good luck author.

It’s a new novel by a new writer but… This is actually so good??? Outside of a few minor typos this is basically perfect. I don’t know how often it will update but I can’t wait to see where this novel goes, thank you Clevvy for the opportunity to read your work! I hope you get lots of people who enjoy your novel as much as I just did and more.

Hello, Reader I am giving myself a shameless 5-star review, because that seems to be a tradition here. Before reading this novel, there is a brutal scene with one of the female-lead characters at the beginning of the story. (Also, I am not a native English speaker, so please expect some errors. If you could tell me what mistakes I made, I will do my best to correct them)

Is there romance?                                                                                                                                       

This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked.While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!