Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

I like the story, it is something new to see a mother as a mc, hope she will get closer to her daughter again, I like nearly everything, just not Mark(love interest?), I find him annoying and an age difference from 16 years seems big, hope he will just get friendzoned, will see how it will continue, for now I will read more

i have already read this story on scribblehub i love it. [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

this is the kind of novel I've been searching for.
I love this author. ALL HAIL GOD KING PANCAKES WITCH.  GREATEST AUTHOR OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gostei muito , acho muito fofo como ela tenta se aproximar da filha

D*mn maybe it will get updated here someday

Stopped at ch.113
there are many good points, namely the quality of writing, the configuration of the world, the game system.

among the problems there are the secondary characters (mark) who are just unbearable, the romance which is slowly built and which just has no place and worst of all, MC.

Even though I loved MC at first she's stupid. completely and utterly stupid. It makes you wonder how such a person can be a 36 year old mother.

there's also the fact that EVERY D*MN CHARACTER STUTTERS IN EVERY D*MN PARAGRAPH!

I would say give it a try if you don't have anything better to read and see if you like it, if you can tolerate the flaws it could be a good novel with lots of chapters.

The blip you mean XD

I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion.

I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling.

I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out.

The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel.

The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line.

Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest.

Give the novel a try!

I, the great Siros had blessed you with a 5 star review.

Be honored.............………….................................................................

Any book that came from Pancakes is bound to be Good, especially like Glitched System and EoC.

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the story is really well designed, using both our fantasies and the relatable reality. I think the fact that the daughter has become cold towards fer mother (the MC) after her fathers death is verry well made, as normally it happens.

Also get Rita one of these