First of all the picture is misleading...he is not an archer, he's a martial artist. The naming sense is terrible, and there are a lot of inconsistencies like one moment the enemy is a 2nd class martial master then at the next chapter he's become a 1st class. I mean come on. It's so confusing that I got tired oF it so I just skimmed thru a lot. Full of Chinese cliche. The mc is ruthless but he's always underestimated even if everybody knows that he's op just for the sake of bullshit. It's good if you're just starting to read novels. Whats with the Chinese always 'splitting',burning,defying heaven? If the heavens could just reply back it would say 'you Chinese fcks better get circumsised first before talking about splitting me.
Overall, a very entertaining story. The Author got a nice way to develop his view of the overused theme VRMMORPG + Reborn MC + OP Knowledge/stats and mixes elements of many different styles.I'll try to summarize without spoilers:PROs: * Elements mixed from Game stories, apocaliptical stories, RPG, etc.* Good background construction and use of background elements - author could make a better descriptions of citys and sites the MC visits, like describing architeture, climate, but, even so, it's not bad the way it is now.* There are many misteries about the world and development of the story, but the author answers a part of this relatively fast. New dramas are constructed in a smooth way, so that we readers keep entertained.CONs:* Writing quality at the beggining is poor, with a lot of grammar errors. It gets better, especialy after 100 chapters.*MC, sometimes, makes stupid decisions, and repeat some nonsenses. In regards of personality, I guess it's ok (there are times i think he looks to be a psyco). But, stuff like having inventory function, and always hunting for food, even knowing that he cant cook. BTW, he could buy any cooking skill in his travels, or some seasoning!* Author has a nasty habit of tricking his readers with comments outside the author's comment area, and using excessively stat and quest views to increase word count and get paid for text that shouldn't be in the story. BTW, this practice makes me not give 5 stars in all the stories I rate with this practice when they go premium.
saw you were playing with the plot in the first few chapters. But I really love how the story progressed into something serious and complex. Solid world building, nice pacing and good character development. You really have something good going on here. With some editors and a good publisher, you might get a franchise or best seller. Probably a movie.
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It’s definitely a good novel I love the way it starts off, it reminds me of your other book in my bloody hit novel all in all great book love the mc and I have nothing but gratitude for you writing this.
this novel has been wrongly titled you know.....it should be called the maverick errands boy(coz that's the only thing i've seen him do in the entire novel)
Since the accident that cost her memories five years ago, Tsubaki would be extra careful whenever she wanted to cross a road. She was totally certain of it so how could the van speed up once she stepped on the tarmac?
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