This FF is literally for prople Who knows nothing of naruto. There is so many plot holes I cant even read this shi. He’s so weak bruv. How are you an Otsusuki but cant handle your own ****n chaKra when your chakra passively increases your own strength? Like what? Imagine have so much chakra but cant even fight? The author said hIs mother was gonna train him jus for hIm to just learn about his clan. i dont really think that counts as training. Go actually watch the show and stop writing this nonsense.
Honestly, the story is great, the development is good, the world building is subpar BUTTT, BUTTT THE TRANSLATION IS BLOODY HOORIBLE, LIKE, ITS BASICALLY A TRASHY MTL COPY PASTE
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