Born of Blood and Moonlight

Hello guys. Author here. This is my first time in attempting writing other than my exams.  So that's how big of a newbie I am. So if you are willing to give some constructive criticism be my guest. For the people who don't like my story sorry but I'm not sorry. For the people who like the story please drop in a review or a comment that would be appreciated. If I make some mistake please let me know what it is I'm totally new to this. Thank you for the read. I appreciate it.

I love this warhammer fanfic and would love to see it continued. the story is very unique compared to other fanfics I've read and the character development is very well written it does make me sad though that the author decided to stop writing on such a massive cliffhanger. I'd love to see this fanfic being updated again and I hope that the author hasn't decided to drop it completely.

WE NEED MORE NOVELS like this!!!!-REAL TRANSLATED BOOKS, not fake books that plagiarize copyrighted books with fake localized name and edited plot.

Grammar has flaws and the author should use grammarly or an editor, however the story itself makes up for it so I suppose it's an alright read.

It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.

this could be the next big thing. but u kinda fu*ked up everything. anyway, a fresh concept.***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

This is trash. The foundation for the novel is nonexistent. there is too many cliche and cringey moments causing my eyes to bleed just trying to read them.

This Novel is fantastic, I dont what to say but this is really a great novel. One of the greatest novel I read, hope you continue writing some other Novel. (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧