First of all, I like how you build your characters! They all have personalities that make them unique to each other. The fighting scenes are cool as well and written in a way that makes you imagine the whole thing. Kind of have an issue with the way the paragraphs are spliced but it's cool. It could be worked on.Anyway, great work!
I'm leaving this review after paying for 10 chapters (chapter 60 to 70).The translation quality is great up until you have to pay for the chapters. After the chapters are premium the grammar goes into the dirt. The free chapters are a lure, after you start paying, the translator gets lazy as f***. You would think that the quality would get better since we as readers are paying for a product, but no they are just phishing. Seriously the TL can go get bent. Just because you go premium doesnt mean you can get lazy and drop the quality to bare minimum. Although maybe there are some dumb people who will accept it, how many readers are you alienating because of the blatant money grab? Literally the first paid chapter is so much more substandard than the free ones that it is jarring to read. It has turned a story I was thinking about paying to read into one that I am warning anyone and everyone into staying away from.Seriously stay away from this BS money grab, low class phishing scheme. I already wasted money by buying 10 chapters thinking the quality translation would continue. *Hint* It doesnt.
Although the main character is a bit of a disappointment in the beginning, the growth he experiences within the first 60 chapters forges him into a determined smart and likable person.ufffcufffc
I absolutely love the premise of the story, and the introduction of the servants in a world of Cultivation is a very interesting and fresh concept.it's sad to hear it won't be updated as often as your other works (if at all), I find this one to be the most interesting out of all your works, I just hope it isn't abandoned.if it's not abandoned, then I look forward to seeing what you have in store.Have a Nice Day and Stay Healthy!
A very good story, with a excelent background world, funny moments and good story so far. The grammar can be improved but it is not that bad.Updated every day, and with a lot of story development.There is not only battles and level ups, in fact the main character do not really care about these things, he is fine with have fun.I like it a lot.I hope the author keeps writing the novel
I loved this story! The alternate ending neary made me cry. I love how the characters were designed and how they grew, and I really hope there is a sequel or will be one, one day possibly. It was such a lovely story.
i let you live because i want to kil you mysel! but you are done for! you are super duper weak and your injury is super duper! die in my hands! you killed the strongest human among gods..
"I created 'A Contract of Misfortune'. If I leave the person that contract is bound to then I die along with them." Brenda had heard about such contracts but she had never known of anyone to do it.
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