Bones of Authority

A sharp rap on the door and King Peppy poked his beard into the room, waving at Dr. Moonbloom. "We're about finished with supper," he told her. "Creek is ready for you while I plate up."

"Welcome to Totsuki." Erina said simply and shortly to Soma as she walked elegantly towards Leon as if she was trying to show herself to him

The doctor looked at the horrified and sad faces around the room, a knowing yet sorrowful look flickering in his green eyes as he ran a finger through his blonde hair before continuing.

Which is the exact rule we're trying to avoid right now...

"Car! Where the f"ck are you Carl!" I heard a voice, that voice! I tought  my suffer is already over? The monster? Why he still a life?

This has one of the best potentials ive seen in a novel in a while. It could become great with the way the writer is producing the story. Props to him

Interessante 🤔 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________