As a woman i dont read novels where the MC is (m) i prefer women but this one got me so hooked on the first chapters and i only rate writing quality and character design for now i still need more chapters before rating world background but my opinion is that author is very good at making you imagine his scenes without trying its really good so far
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within.If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too:- Let Me Choose You- Who Are You- Facing Into The SkyThanks🤍🤍🤍
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Well from what I have read this novel keeps you in the dark most of the time. And I swear the Mc has multiple personalities from the way he acts. He mercies an opponent in an arena and in the exact next paragraph he says that that he will not give mercy as it’s a death game, and again after he says that he tells the opponent to give up. The way the author implements humour is excruciating, he would be threatening someone and the next second he’s getting smacked in the head like a comedy skit. The story progresses pretty fast and the world building lacks considerably compared to it creating situations where a person would be introduced as the relative of your arch enemy, but we don’t know who that arch enemy is. The switch in moods makes it so readers have a hard time imagining the mood and frankly it irritates me. We are not even given the technology level of the world and what we have to do is put bits and pieces together to make up one. there are too many times things just don’t add up, and in the end contradicts eachother.
Good writing quality and stability of updates, but the problem is the story itself, atleast up til chapter 50, where I stopped reading becuase I am not wasting Fast Passes on this if the same quality continues.The main character is just bland, a blank paper that nothing is written on. This might be something that the skill of Cranberry, but I doubt it. The reincarnation part is also utterly useless, and it never factors into the story or the character, outside of a quirky comment about names in this new world.Cranberry is just the good old "abused but not THAT bad
Uhm guys, author here, I just want to inform you that I am just a kid and I go to school, so it would be very hard to publish 3 chapters a day, but ill try my best...Also, this novel will only have 50k+ word count and 100+ chapters. So sorry if you expect a very long novel.Also, in the future if I am done with this novel, I will create a second book, if I can...Ciao,Your Ugly Author
Love the sequel story but I'm worried about the lack of updates. As for the story itself, I'm glad we're finally seeing character development from the MC, I think the author even pokes fun at himself in a scene where the MC acknowledges his lack of emotional growth
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