So far, the novel is very similar to Ascent in Hollywood and the Hollywood Hunter. I like, I wonder what will happen next with the main character. A big minus the harem, I do not like this genre.
A great story that I have read tons of MTL. Really intriguing and exciting. I just hope that it doesn't have too much of it cut out or censored!Worth the read!
Currently my best.... The translation is quite good... Ah like the storyline... MC is not always dumb and stupid... The characters are well made... No random killing off of characters!
Everything that could be better with the story in my opinion I'm only in Chapter 13.First, you should download Grammarly if you don't already have it because there are spelling mistakes, "or" you could also use virtualwritingtutor.com.Second, the dialogue is weird. You would try rephrasing some sentences because it doesn't sound natural. This would be better for readers to get immersed in the reading.Third, you could try explaining more things because I kinda got confused about how he knew all this stuff.Fourth, you kinda add some unnecessary words in the sentence this makes it feel unnatural. Fifth, some of the dialogue is kind of cringe this is my opinion Idk if any others think this.Overall I'm liking the story so far.
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