Blood Pact : Trapped inside the bloody Otome game

" system use lottery ticket I got from completing my mission "

He watched them a bit longer before his gaze drifted across the rest of the room. People were served beautiful dishes of food that made his stomach rumble in envy. But he told himself he would just wait until Aiden got here and they could have food along with drinks in their private room. He flagged that bartender down and got a glass of water to also drink along with his alcohol. His grandmother had always told him that the nest way to avoid a hangover besides not drinking was to make sure you drank water along with your whiskey.

it has a  great storyline , and the writing quality is good .

1. Amber was employed by the MC to be his secretary, but I'm guessing the many chapters of Amber not making an appearance caused chatGPT to forget about her existence since in a later chapter, his secretary is someone else?2. All that interaction and romantic tension with Amber and yet the author just kind of forgot about her. When she reappeared it felt more like "Oh damn, I forgot she existed. Better write her back in" from the author.3. The MC already met with the president and yet in a later chapter the president goes "I can finally meet the man of innovation". Either chatGPT memory is lacking or the author is going too fast to the point of forgetting their own story. it wasnt even that long ago of the MC meeting the president before this chapter.4. Almost every dialouge just feels the same. Constant usage of similar phrases and the way every dialogue ends as well is the same. Might want to experiment with dialogue to change stuff up because its hard NOT to notice dialogue feeling and sounding the same when I read them.Overall: I like the story, I just hope the Author puts more attention to detail like with Amber's existence and the MC meeting the president for the first time TWICE. Whether or not the author uses AI in their writing, I dont care, Just pay attention to your own writing and story and avoid these minor inconsistencies. They may be minor in your eyes, but they can really derail a reader from the story since they'll beq+q focusing on the thought of "Didnt he already meet the president though?". There's alot of timeskipping too, maybe thats the cause of these inconsistencies since the story is moving fast, very fast. Hope that from the chapter im currently on, I dont see anymore inconsistencies. what caused me to write this review was really because the MC's secretary wasnt Amber, who was formally employed at the end of a chapter, but a background character.

I have to say good start but in only 23 chapters he has built a world where there is no law system and only karens walk around. The MC died almost 3 times in 3 days but didn't grow smart or cautious but only arrogant. A world background and strength system that doesn't make sense and has plot holes as big as the death star and yeah I could go on a bit but I think it's enough. It's sad I really did like the novel but well I'm off gb.

Listen, I don’t know what kind of divine enlightenment the author achieved before writing this book, but I’m convinced he ascended to a higher plane of existence, met the gods, slapped them in the face, and came back to bless us mortals with peak fiction.From the moment I started reading, I felt my IQ skyrocketing. My third eye opened. My spine straightened. My posture went from goblin mode to Greek statue in seconds. The prose? Crisp. The world-building? Immaculate. The plot twists? Had me gasping like a fish out of water. Every chapter ended with me gripping my phone like it owed me money, whispering, “Just one more…” until the sun came up.And don’t even get me started on the main character. Kyoji is HIM. The GOAT. The blueprint. This man walks into a room, and reality itself holds its breath. His abilities? Busted. His personality? Flawless. His plans? So far ahead that even the author is just along for the ride. I’m convinced Kyoji doesn’t even need to fight—he could just stand there, and the enemies would be like, “Yeah, nah, I’m good” before disintegrating out of pure respect.The action scenes? Cinematic. Every battle had me reenacting moves in my living room like I was in a martial arts training montage. The tension? So thick you could cut it with one of Kyoji’s blood blades. Honestly, this book ruined me. How am I supposed to go back to reading normal stories after experiencing this masterpiece? Everything else feels like caveman scribbles compared to this magnum opus. I need the sequel. I need the spin-offs. I need the author to be legally required to write ten chapters a day.Final verdict: 11/10. If you haven’t read this yet, what are you even doing with your life?