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first the sentence structure seems really basic which is fine as it keeps it simple and easy to grasp at times. though I think some of it is to really reach wors count which is understandable.
-takes time to really introduce the world which can be boring at times but provides a solid background to the characters and world immersion that many stories dont on here.
-can tell thought went into each of the characters as none of them really seem wasted
-progression is at a solid pace
now for story can tell that there is thought in it and not just mindless writing. also clearly at least listens and considers comment readers have left behind.
its refreshing to find an author that cares about their work and readers interest.
60 chapters in and I greatly look forward to the develop and story this world has to offer.
From what I have entered from the first few chapters:
The novel is worth reading
The novel will be going down an interesting path
The main character is kinda unique
The supporting characters are great, hope to see more of Theodore!
review:
1. wiriting quality is good enough to read.
2. story is developing in a right direction.
3. mc is confident, he has brain and he uses it.
4. female lead is cute (really she is)
5. zero to no misunderstandings.
6. side characters have their own story and problems so we can understand their character but author focuses more on mc's story which is fair enough for me.
7. To be honest world has yet to be developed and till now it is good developement has lot of potential.
JUST GIVE IT A TRY YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT.
I'm giving 4 stars here. The writing is pretty decent. The plot is also nice and there are a lot of interesting concepts. A lot of details and information are skipped which is a huge downside for me. Pacing feels a bit unnatural but I don't really mind. All in all, this story's a pretty good one. Its just that I can't really be a fan of the story since there aren't many bright spots either. I believe this novel belongs to the above average grade but not particularly unique.
As of now I havent read the novel because it has not reached 100 chapters yet. The main reason why I picked to read this novel is because I seen the military academy tag. I hope there will be different things in this academy like fighting tournaments, missions and mysteries.
I love the world background, the writing and how the things are going, this story is so exciting, it makes you want to read more and more, thank you author <3, everytime I read a new chapter it brightens my day
The first chapter I read this I would say that this is good and have a potential to rise like cultivation online I see a lot of novel that has a good and bad story soo even Im look like a kid but I have a great eye for a great things soo dont let me down.
I will give you 5.0 keep it up but take note dont totally copy the vampire system story or you will be sue by there fans.
This novel is great I cant wait for the Author to come back and write it again! It has lots of potential and doesn’t have any major issues like widespread grammer issues etc. i cant wait to read this again
I am hocked to this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am dying with curiosity of what will happen next. Hearts and more hearts, this is just too good❤❤
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first the sentence structure seems really basic which is fine as it keeps it simple and easy to grasp at times. though I think some of it is to really reach wors count which is understandable.
-takes time to really introduce the world which can be boring at times but provides a solid background to the characters and world immersion that many stories dont on here.
-can tell thought went into each of the characters as none of them really seem wasted
-progression is at a solid pace
now for story can tell that there is thought in it and not just mindless writing. also clearly at least listens and considers comment readers have left behind.
its refreshing to find an author that cares about their work and readers interest.
60 chapters in and I greatly look forward to the develop and story this world has to offer.
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The novel is worth reading
The novel will be going down an interesting path
The main character is kinda unique
The supporting characters are great, hope to see more of Theodore!
1. wiriting quality is good enough to read.
2. story is developing in a right direction.
3. mc is confident, he has brain and he uses it.
4. female lead is cute (really she is)
5. zero to no misunderstandings.
6. side characters have their own story and problems so we can understand their character but author focuses more on mc's story which is fair enough for me.
7. To be honest world has yet to be developed and till now it is good developement has lot of potential.
JUST GIVE IT A TRY YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT.
I will give you 5.0 keep it up but take note dont totally copy the vampire system story or you will be sue by there fans.
take this good advise.
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