Blemished Soup with Garlic

Thank you Taintedmetal for this collection of interesting experience.it did at some point felt relevant to everyday lIfe. The stories reflect just drawn thoughts of the author probably a series of them which i find with a lot of humor at the begining which is lIght for laughter and the at the middle which could be related to real life experience and the a little deep in thought part in the end and closing. i find the part when Cynthia punch Diah hillarious i was laughing out loud. The letters back and forth interesting. And you finding the two voLunteers to be cannabalised through the “web” - good use of pulling reading through different dimensions. it’s like and makes a reader laugh over it

Weird. Fascinating. A good horror story with a right amount of gore (not explicit) and all weird stuff that makes you feels uncomfortable as you read more about it. It is just like the title, it is a garlic soup, some people will like it, some people won't, some won't even touch it, some may try for the taste.
Here, takes this solid 5* from me.

The looks of the books seemed promising which triggered me to read. I love the fact the book is simply detailed and highly relatable. Each chapters is titled and with different plot. kudos

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I love it! It is very well-written and descriptive, and it helps the reader imagine the scenes almost perfectly. Each chapter has a unique plot and titles.And what I love the most, is the suspense a reader will feel, as she read through the words.

In my opinion, all the chapters have a unique and interesting idea. The story has creepy factors that make it more intriguing and exciting to read at the same time. The world itself felt quite alive and interesting to explore. The writing style in the story is some of the best writing styles in the book that I ever had and the flow of the story is pretty smooth and clear. The characters are also interesting to explore. Some of the chapters have a very good quality storyline and a unique plot twist.

However, some of the chapters in the story have a kind of alright execution and some of the chapter ideas feel kind of bland or the plot twist is pretty expected.

I think that's all I had to say about this story and Overall rating, in my opinion for this book is 8.7/10. Keep up a good work

Great writing skills! You have a great flow and ngl your story writing skills feels enigmatic and SO SO intriguing that it's almost impossible to stop reading. Definitely a page turner. I was intrigued by your short stories and I really love your themes and ideas for them. Keep up the good work!

This was a new read for me, this was an extraordinary and wonderful novel. The vocabulary and writing proficiency was supremely promising from the author. keep it up!