BLADE NO MAGIC

To start I think this book has a lot of potential, with a great mc and background that gives the story a great fundamental that could see it being at the top of the power rankings for many weeks when it breaks through.Unfortunately the writing let’s down an otherwise great story, the high use of exclamation marks are mildly cringy and childlike, and the “story for another day” does nothing more than break immersion and cause annoyance. If I wanted a story for another day I’d just wait to read the chapter, the fact I’m reading the chapter means i want a story now! See right way to use an exclamation mark. I understand giving the readers things to wonder about to keep them reading but there’s much better methods. I hope these problems become fixed in later chapters (only about 50 in so far) but if they are I can see this novel really becoming popular. Would love to work on this novel as an editor to be honest!

At 10 chapters, looks like great character building  slowly endorsing him into combat sports. Right now it's just boxing but if we see different martial arts like muay Thai,  ju jitsu, that would make the novel whole lot complete. Still it's definitely a novel I am very much going to be reading in the future. I will be saying to author to keep it up.it is  brilliant and I cannot wait to read more of it.

Name: Rick winter

Alex called back his Chastiefol, he already killed ¼ of the people from the Goddess clan, so he was satisfied.

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Book was great UNTIL the author went and trashed everything he worked on for the first few hundred chapters. He literally destroys the whole planet they live on and tosses them onto another planet where humans are just slaves. All the characters, world building, etc. gone in one chapter. What gets me is after there planet with all their family was destroyed there is no grieving. They are just kind of like well that sucks now let's continue. That being said if you can get over that the book is good. The writing quality is good, the release rate is good, the grammar is good. I dropped it about 50 chapters after they blew up the original planet.

In a futuristic world of high-tech cultivation, where power reigns supreme, an 18-year-old boy named Yuki stumbles through life with no talent, no skills, and a knack for causing trouble. But fate has other plans—his outrageous luck and a mysterious artifact make him untouchable to gods, unbreakable to enemies, and an enigma to all. As he bumbles through dangerous realms and impossible challenges, Yuki’s foolish antics turn deadly trials into comedic chaos, leaving allies amazed and enemies in shambles. Will this "divine fool" unlock his true potential or just keep defying logic? One thing’s certain: the Void is about to get a lot more interesting.it is very good novel you will also like it as much you keep reading it.