It falls into the trope of building characters only for one arc and then never using them again. Female characters that would appear long term are forced to be abandoned cause they can't keep up And if you have read any cultivation novel you know that when he leaves the realm everyone becomes unimportant never to be seen again That happens in chapter 416.
How can novels be reviewed before chapters release? @qidian @webnovel please disable before chapters release XD bad design...Though, I do hope this is a good novel.
Well, I like how it started. If the author will continue to update this novel, I'll read all the chapters and even give some power stones. Thank you for such a nice video game novel. Good luck
Good tsun(lowkey) goddess and loco old man who be trolling said goddess and the Universe! 1414141414141414141141441414141415151515151515151511515161616161616161617171717717171717118181818
The work has a very good idea. A well summarized but relatively strange synopsis may not please many, so I suggest you take a look at it later. I can't give too much of a review given there isn't much content available at the moment, however. here are some things about the work: The writing is normal/okay and doesn't get in the way, but it could be improved. Grammatical errors are constant and, if possible or necessary, I highly recommend using tools that can help you fix this. Also remember to improve the spacing you use between lines; in some situations it was a bit confusing to understand the descriptions.The idea is cool and can be worked on to improve over time. I'll try to stay here on your journey, and I'll come back later to make further observations about the work. Finally, sorry for the somewhat "superficial" review, and keep up the good work.
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