Is life a lie?
I wonder…
If I dream long enough, will that become my reality?
I want the truth.
I'll find it, one way or another...
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Well, I highly doubt anyone will be reading this, but if you do, all I ask is that you provide criticism and help me along my journey(if you don't that's perfectly fine) I'm not exactly sure what I'm doing, and I tend to be wordy, but thank you for stopping by!
Ah, and as for what this story will be about: it’s meant to be a journey of self-discovery. Hopefully, it will include some moving psychological shenanigans and elements of horror. Of course, I’d like to maintain a healthy balance of action.
As for romance, I’m not sure; I guess we’ll see how it develops as we go on...
Beyond the Lucid Veil
- Genre： Fantasy
- Author： LucianNoir
- Translator：
- Status： Ongoing
- Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★
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This novel, is my first experiment, and if you can bear with my first 2 chapters , you might even enjoy your time.
I have this first arc drawn out, and I think it might even be kinda good...
Also, if you care... could you tell me why you stopped by, or why my book captivated you enough to click on it? this would just help me understand what yall want!
lots of love for checking me out❤🙏
Pros:
- Very descriptive writing, I can picture it like an anime in my head
- First chapter has an interesting hook
- Character designs (when they are described) are cool, like the boy in chapter 3
Cons:
- The chapters seem quite disconnected from each other (but maybe you have plans to tie them together in the future?)
- The random romance in chapter 2 seems a little unnecessary
- Reads like a creepypasta at some points