Beyond The Control

i never want this series to end!!

Hey dear!! I'm not here to give review, as I haven't started reading it. I will read it when atleast 50 chapters are written and uploaded. Honestly I was really disappointed after you dropped top star . And there are many readers who are also disappointed and it's obvious why they are disappointed. You know, you can always resume that novel. It's not a big deal. As an author, you should take responsibility if it's in your capability....and only if it's in your capability. And its not a big deal even if you don't resume it. Focus on your new story and don't disappoint the new readers.....and yourself. I know it must be bad to see so many negative comments. Don't get discouraged. 😊You're Indian author, right? Why don't you right about bollywood? I would really love to read about bollywood superstar and his/her journey. You will get so many good ideas as you know about it more that Chinese entertainment industry. There are so many scandals we are reading about bollywood right now, it's totally worth to become a story. I hope you one day write about it. Good luck with your new story 🙂

Dead already? No updates and we are going on a week since the last one. Pretty unfortunate if it doesn't even make it past 20 chapters.It is also dumb that reviews have a character limit, not much else I can say about the story, BECAUSE IT'S ONLY AT TWENTY CHAPTERS!

😇🤭🤭😇🤭🤭🤭😇🤭😇🤭🤭🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭🤭😇🤭😇🤭🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭😇🤭🤭😇🤭😇

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Some people may like it but most of people especially old readers will hate it especially if they read other kingdom building novel.I suggest if you don't want to lose your brain cell then don't read it.other world has 0 background.IDK how the **** MC buy sword crossbow and guns in morden era? There are 0 info or interaction with other world 🌎Also how the fk a army which one trained less than 1 month beat a well trained army?MC/Author logic advance equipment I say BS. we all know Advance equipment only provide little advantage.But not that much to win especially in that eraMc is hypocrite.I hope this trash don't pick up because it will dropped within few months. Reading this novel is like reading a sammary.Background is suck.

It's a good story with an interesting plotline. The story development was pace rather slowly, but it suits the plot well. Every scene was unfolding with a good description, and it was well detailed. There were just a few grammatical errors, such as the misuse of pronouns. It's minimal, and I think that this story would develop better.

This novel is fun and differenr from other cultivation novel. I wonder why the mc didnt buy some op skill from the store. Its a shame that the author dropped it.