Remember reading this in a forum. Its not that bad actually. Reason to 5 star, i just cant stand seing a game element rate to low.So... bite me.Not 140 char yet.
Sigh look I know I gave it a 3 star review, don't let that number stop you from reading please. This power system I love it too pieces the writing style of the author just needs some polishing on the mechanics. There's not huge grammar issues or anything it's readable just needs work. I'll follow this series closely hopefully one day I can give it the 5 stars I know this story should be able to get.
seems like a good story, it's just translated very poorly you can definitely tell English isn't the authors first language, if you had this story translated better I would definitely read it, but as it is it's far to confusing.
Its great so far should give it a try.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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