[WARNING MATURE CONTENT]
NOTE: YANDERE IS HERE
Some Heroine might love MC too soon. But does love need a reason or time? If you already love someone, this reason is useless.
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What happens if the game you\'ve been playing for a long time turns out to have a world of its own?
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A boy who experienced death in a strange way.
Reincarnated into the eroge game he had played before.
Reincarnated as the protagonist\'s best friend character in the story, who will be killed by the protagonist himself to make the protagonist strong, doesn\'t make him give up, with help of the system he has now.
Watch his journey in conquering the hearts of heroines and saving the world.
Character image sees on my discord server.
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Warning: This Novel is only FICTION, don\'t compare it with the real world.
Strict warning!!!!!! if you don\'t like where the 10-year-old MC has puppy love. Don\'t read this novel. You know, a lot of novels start very young, and mine is one of them.
The MC in this novel has very slow character development. You probably won\'t like this.
You Have Been Warned.
Notice: There are no genres like Yuri or LGBT here. I also don\'t write genres like Netorare and others. I\'m not a person who likes things like that.
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Grammar might be a bad thing in this novel but bear with it.
The beginning of the novel is a disaster, this is my first novel, plus English is not my first language.
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[English is not my first language, so if there are any wrong words, please forgive me.]
[The image above is not mine. If the owner doesn\'t want me to use it, you can tell me and I will change it.]

Berserk Stick System
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: Zontal_Zev
- Translator:
- Status: Ongoing
- Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★
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it started out fine, the character building wasn't very bad, and the world building was good too and I enjoyed the beginning. But then the MC became "Bipolar" what he does and what he says, keep jumping all over the place.
Sometimes doesn't even make sense and the comedy skits, becomes cringeworthy. I mean, If you're 10 years old you might like it.. which isn't realistic as this is an 18+ novel, but me as an adult, I can't. So the big question is, who is the target audience for this novel?.
Idk.. This is just my opinion/review
Writing Quality - 3/5
SOF - 5/5
Story Dev - 2/5
Character Design - 3/5
World background - 4/5
Overall 3.4/5
This is the second novel that I have written. Actually, this is a remake of my previous novel, so you can consider this my first novel.
Because the previous novel that I made used my first language and the story I felt was not satisfactory.I finally decided to remake.
I can't say that my novel is good but I'll let you guys judge for yourself
If you see a mistake I'm sorry, English is not my first language.
I would really appreciate it if you guys support me, thank you.
The story is also good so far, hoping to see more updates.
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but the english is really bad.
Better than MTL.
There are a few things being inaccurate, anatomy doesnt seem to agree with author.
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