Berserk Stick System

Its not even funny anymore how much pedo this novel is, only going for children 10-16 yrs old exclusively

The protagonist is a boy for the ones who were confused on the synopsis.

The story is also good so far, hoping to see more updates.

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The book started out decently and just got worse and worse as it went along. The relationships and the comedy just feel forced. The mc waisted all his time during a six year time skip resulting in no progression. The mc also doesn’t use his points properly making it quite frustrating

Here's my opinion of this novel.
it started out fine, the character building wasn't very bad, and the world building was good too and I enjoyed the beginning. But then the MC became "Bipolar" what he does and what he says, keep jumping all over the place.
Sometimes doesn't even make sense and the comedy skits, becomes cringeworthy. I mean, If you're 10 years old you might like it.. which isn't realistic as this is an 18+ novel, but me as an adult, I can't. So the big question is, who is the target audience for this novel?.

Idk.. This is just my opinion/review
Writing Quality - 3/5
SOF - 5/5
Story Dev - 2/5
Character Design - 3/5
World background - 4/5

Overall 3.4/5

the novel characteristic are heavily on a  game mechanic rather than a reality mechanic so u can expect 'all u can do mc' without proper progress battle experience and reason

I'm now a shameless review writer.

This is the second novel that I have written. Actually, this is a remake of my previous novel, so you can consider this my first novel.

Because the previous novel that I made used my first language and the story I felt was not satisfactory.I finally decided to remake.

I can't say that my novel is good but I'll let you guys judge for yourself

If you see a mistake I'm sorry, English is not my first language.

I would really appreciate it if you guys support me, thank you.

What can I say? Chinanumbawan is written all over this. It's a tad higher than those MTL Novels but still... it's something like a High Mid-tier Tr@sh.

every encounter seems forced , i read upto 50+ chapters and its seems like i am reading something with no proper background or any interesting story development . After reading the synopsis i though if a story is inspired by Little Tyrant how bad the story progression can go? But the Author showed that , he can make is so bad that even an interesting plot can be made into lackluster and girls collection story. I guess Author did not remember the Little Tyrant story part but just the wet dreams he had after reading Little Tyrant . I had high hopes while reading 20+ chapter which was going quite well , but it took a nose dive.