This story could be so good but the author refuses to not focus on the character Aina. The entirety of the main characters will and desires is focused on her regardless of what she does. There's been no explanation in 600 chapters of reading as to why he does this. It just becomes unbearable and its to an unreasonable degree.
Very good story! Is very intriguing and has a very good start. I don't particularly like that it's written in present tense for the most part, but I got used to it. It does have a few Grammer errors though.
I am very happy with the fact that our mc talents lye in formations instead of pills or weapon forging. I believe those have already been done and overused by other authors so this is a great divergence from the norm. Thanks for the hard work so far keep it up.
Wow, So good so far. I never expected you to focus more on kali's character development. I hope you write about kalki's story too. I hope you continue writing this series. I love Hinduism concepts story.
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