Beloved

The starting looks amazing.  Looking forward to read more.

I feel like you have a good handle on emotions and conveying them in you characters. However, your chapters are very confusing.The first few paragraphs in each chapter have nothing to do with the chapter itself and distracts from the overall story. I do think you have a good story overall.

i loved the book a litt sad when you killed off triston

Oh I mean the more I read the more I like Serena she is just the newly born innocent baby without the touch of this evil world