I can’ believe it hasn’t been even two weeks on novel timeline even though the novel is past 1000 chapters. And it is still the first arc. Writing quality is good but lack of timeline progression really bothers me.
I am at chp 9 and totally loved this chapter : Slow dance with me. Waiting for the moment when Sarah shows them the recording. Hehehe. I must say, wonderful story out line and i ship Keagen and Freddie.. Lol.. But this story is having nothing disturbing at all. Its going good in its own way. Good Effort dear author. :)
I'm giving myself 5 stars because everyone does it :PI'm not an expert on writing stories however I think I improve with every chapter I do.Not sure tho.
This is a really great start! Cooking-based stories are really hard to come by and it's refreshing to see this genre used again. My mom is a chef so I grew up cooking and stories like these are really fun to read especially if they involve real recipes and techniques. Also, the interactions the MC has with Rena are hilarious and I'm always a fan of the simple and blunt main character who is actually really skilled at what he does. This was just really fun to read and writing is really good. Also, the dialogue is incredibly natural and it helps a lot with the immersion. Really great! Looking forward to more!
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