Becoming a Powerful God Starting from Daily Intelligence

Hi author here, this is my entry to the writing prompt for the school life theme.Once again hoping for support and for those who are reading Overwhelming Path don't worry not dropping that.

For an SAO parody...This isn't bad. The Kirito here seems better if you ask me. The VR logic is somehow vague for me at first but then I understood it after reading a bit far off onto chapter 20.But overall, This puts a smile on my face ;)

overall a great story however the quality of the translation is what is really holding it back, I would recommend this story getting an editor or something because it can get pretty hard to read at times

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"I need the shadow emissary. Alive. We need to have a good conversation." Naga said and smiled.

He began to swing his lance from left to right, and continued to shoot him without any hesitation.

"Shit. It's calling for reinforcements. If I remain here any longer, I'll just be ranked from all sides. I need to get out now."

Level 1-5 = First Year Signal